Author's Note: This story is about an alternate to the story "Buried Treasure" but this is how i think it should have ended.
Right before Cody was about to melt the hook he thought to
himself “Would I want someone to take something a cherish?” and that’s when he
changed. He decided to make the long trip back to Clarence’s house and give the
hook back. When he got to Clarence’s house he began digging as fast as
possible. He started to dig faster and fast because he felt as if someone was
watching him. Every once in a while he would feel a light breeze and heard his
name being whispered. When he got all the dirt off the coffin he opened it up
something was wrong. Clarence’s body was gone. While Cody was staring into the
empty coffin he felt the breeze again and along with the breeze and light push
and the light push made Cody lose balance and fall head first into the coffin.
When he land in the coffin the lid shut right behind him and when he was in the
coffin he heard the sound of dirt getting flung on top of the coffin. No one
ever saw Cody after that day.
WHAT MADE CODY FEEL THE WAY HE DID ABOUT RETURNING THE GOLD, WHY WAS HE PUNISHED, EVEN THOUGH HE RETURNED THE GOLD? ANY DIALOG YOU COULD INCLUDE?
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