Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Cody's Last Breath


Author's Note: This story is about an alternate to the story "Buried Treasure" but this is how i think it should have ended.
Right before Cody was about to melt the hook he thought to himself “Would I want someone to take something a cherish?” and that’s when he changed. He decided to make the long trip back to Clarence’s house and give the hook back. When he got to Clarence’s house he began digging as fast as possible. He started to dig faster and fast because he felt as if someone was watching him. Every once in a while he would feel a light breeze and heard his name being whispered. When he got all the dirt off the coffin he opened it up something was wrong. Clarence’s body was gone. While Cody was staring into the empty coffin he felt the breeze again and along with the breeze and light push and the light push made Cody lose balance and fall head first into the coffin. When he land in the coffin the lid shut right behind him and when he was in the coffin he heard the sound of dirt getting flung on top of the coffin. No one ever saw Cody after that day.    

1 comment:

  1. WHAT MADE CODY FEEL THE WAY HE DID ABOUT RETURNING THE GOLD, WHY WAS HE PUNISHED, EVEN THOUGH HE RETURNED THE GOLD? ANY DIALOG YOU COULD INCLUDE?

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