Wednesday, February 29, 2012

Amazing story

Authors note: In this essay i focus on how Robert Muchamore puts humor into his stories, how he describes his charters and how the chapers are action packed.


The book Maximum Security by Robert Muchamore is awesome. What makes it awesome is all the action, the suspense and all the little pieces of humor Robert Muchamore puts in the story. This book has a little bit of everything.  

The book Maximum Security is action packed.  In just the second chapter of the book, the CHERUB group is at a bowling alley, these other high school kids show up and start spilling soda on them and then a fight ensues.  I few chapters later I read about these things called “buddy” bombs. Robert Muchamore described them as a one shot, one kill type thing and the twist was that each rocket cost a million dollars.  But there was a second twist. This story takes place in Great Britain and their ally is the United States and in the middle of shipping the buddy bombs to the U.S. they were “lost” otherwise taken.  So that added a great deal of suspense to the story.     

Another thing that really makes Robert Muchamore a great writer is that he thinks like a reader.  He knows that reading can get boring so he put little pieces of humor in his story where it can start to get wordy or a little bit boring. I haven’t read a book like Maximum  Security before.  

One of the things that really stands out about Robert Muchamore is how he describes the charters in the story.  He creates a visual picture in your head.  He doesn’t just tell you how they look, he tells you what they are like, their personalities, their past, if they are a happy or if they are just an overall mad person.  For example there was one woman in her thirties who had just came out of the army. Robert Muchamore described her as an overall biter girl that basically had no feelings.  He said that she did not care about how anyone felt except for her boss.  

Those are the reasons that I think Maximum Security is an amazing book. The humor, word placement, the description of the charters, the suspense and the action packed chapters. They all come together and make an amazing story.              

Friday, February 3, 2012

Death by water

Authors note: This essay is about overcoming a fear of water that almost killed you.




In America about 36% percent of people can't swim and world wide about 54% can't swim. The story Deep Water instantly grabs by you saying “It had happened when I was ten or eleven years old”(434). You can’t help but read more after that. The author William O. Douglas focuses on the realism and actuality of the world. William O. Douglas represents the scary things that we have to over come in our lives.

The realism in this book is crazy good. One good example is when this ten-year-old is droning. “This is nice….to be drowsy….to go to sleep….no need to jump….to tired to jump…it’s nice to be carried….floating in space.  I crossed to oblivion, and the curtain of life fell”(435). One time when I was 9 I did that same exact thing, except I knew how to swim. But it was still as scary not expecting it and falling into deep water.

William O. Douglas. He focus on being as real as possible. He doesn’t have some fairy come and same the little boy that’s drowning. William O. Douglas talks about how this little boy has to overcome his fear of being in the water. He talks about how this little boy goes to swimming lessons and every time the instructor lets the safety rope have a little slack the little boy gets worried.

The other thing I want to talk about how William O. Douglas puts his words. One piece that really blew me away was “I crossed to Oblivion and the curtain of life fell” (435). That really makes the reader think .  In the first paragraph when the little boy is two or three years old his dad took him to a lake and the waves kept knocking him down. His dad was laughing because he knew nothing was going to happen to the little boy but the little boy just felt so powerless.­


Realism and actuality are something that William O. Douglas focuses on. Those are what makes his stories good, intrusting.